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©2009-2010 =Chelcat
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My half of an art trade with *SilverRainbow of her dragon, Zoga. Done in photoshop, but it turned out better than my other dragon pictures. :)

hope you like it hunny, even if it's not "plotted" like your half! X3


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Character of zoga (c) =Chelcat

Critiques


:iconchessyoshi:
First off, what pops out most is the fur on a scaly dragon. It's clear what it is from the rigid lines around them. What's missing from the hair is a few extra hairlines on the inside to indicate somewhat of a layer. And example of what I mean is used on the paws. Deeper lines show some structure.

My next concern is the snout. While I can tell it's a dragon, the muzzle seems to be rather bent. It must be where the line ends to the right of the nostril. It goes straight down instead on more of a curve.

Horns are a tricky thing to draw. You sure have the angles down cold. However, one thing to remember when placing them on the upper face, they look most symmetrical when placed above the eyes.

One more improvement involves the wings. While the foreground one is well-drawn, the background wing appears to be more of a shadow than another wing. I suggest drawing it a more out from behind the front wing. Especially, given the angle the whole dragon is drawn at.

The colors are nice and solid. Scaly green mixed with airy blue wings imply an avid flyer, which many dragons are.
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:iconsilverrainbow:
OMG awwwww!!!!!!! This is so cute!!!! :aww: He looks so adorable and happy :D I loves the colouring and the way you have done his wiiings. Eyes are really cute and the claws are fantatic! Thank you so much hun, I love it! :hug: I shall get yours done as soon as possible! :glomp: :hug: :aww: :love:

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:iconchelcat:
^W^ awwies! had a little trouble with the colours and the wings, but dat's mah style! ^W^ hehe, that's my first try at decent claws, and i'm pleased with it. :hug:
hehe, no problem, just glad to make someone happy and produce my half of a trade. :)
i look forward to it. :D

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:iconsetsuna-phoenix:
Daaaw this is adorable! Yay Zoga!!! Youve got all the markings spot on and the colours are fabby :aww:. Love the innocent like look youve given him and his eyes are great. Your so good at drawing paws!! :noes:. Hehe great job hun :hug:

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aww thankies! ^W^ really? i guessed on the snout one, i thought it was totally off! X3 yeah, i thought he is quite the innocent character. aaawies, paws are definatly hard, and used to be my epic fail point. i guess i learned improvement myself ^w^
thankies a bundle for this comment! :hug:

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:spork::spork::spork:FEAR THE SPORK!!!!:spork::spork::spork:

my cute, funky icon was made by the awesome *Hippie-Sammy

Art trades: OPEN!
Requests: CLOSED!
Commissions: OPEN!

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